MBCE

Okay, looking at your sheet, I'm having a hard time finding things to test you on. Stage one took care of the skills. Stage two took care of the Mimic attack feature of the suit. We have three more stages to do and right now I see, the elemental conductors as one stage, but then there's still going to be two more stages left open. Is there anything you want to show off here? AS Darian really isn't a combat type character and this is not a combat school, combat doesn'T really fit in. I think defense will come into play for another stage but we'll still need one more task to complete.

Stephanie's voice replies over the speaker. "Hmm, perhaps that will be something you can work on when your duties are not too heavy. Since it needs to recharge, we'll move along to the next stage. Take some time to refresh yourself while we prepare for the next stage." Workers again came out to bring the table of refreshments and a chair for Darian. Others worked to clear away the targets. Stephanie's voice again comes over the speakers. "Darian, would you like to test your Elemental conductors? Are they ready for a work out?"

I hope you realize that the "deflect power" stored in memory won't carry over to anywhere else. :D

Unfortunately, no. It is -3 because the descriptor is Very common, which gives you 3pps. I am assuming you wan the minor limitation which would be a +1Dc at +0pps. Raising it to Moderate, x1.5DC gives you +1pp. The choice is still yours to make. If you wish to keep it as a minor limitation, then simply change the +2DC to +1DC. Vulnerable (Electricity) [conductive metal within suit] -3 (Very Common; +1 DC) If it is the moderate intensity, then it should be as you put it on the sheet, but raises the cost to -4. Vulnerable (Electricity) [conductive metal within suit] -4 (Very Common; x1.5 DC) Once you decide which way to go with this point, you'll be done. :)

Okay. A few Format changes are in order. Please list the feats long way for ease of reading. Yes, it wastes space, but helps for edits. Your skills should be 11pps not 10. You have it correct in the total line but not here in the title. Feats should be 29 not 25. You have them correct in the total line, but not here in the title. Could you please put your device into quotes for ease of reading? Also, does teh device use Extra effort or the character? I'll take a look at the sidekick after the above points have been fixed.

Things seem to add up, but I do a question about his power origin. I beleive, from the background, that his ability to Leap, speed, strike, and Regeneration are all trained aspects, correct? I think you should be a little clear on teh sheet just incase you come up against a hero with a nullify or mimic ability. Last bit, on your drawback. Are you going for the minor severity on vulnerable [gives a +1Dc] or the moderate severity [gives x1.5DC]?

Okay, things look good. Hoever I wouldl ike for you to do a slight format change. Please add the cost of your powers to each indiviual power where xpps equals the total cost of the power. It will help speed up on edits later when you want to make changes. Power rank Info xpps Also, your Initiative still needs to be changed from +13 down to +2. I think you missed that earlier. One last point and this is purely my opinion and you can ignore it or not, but it seems that his additional limbs are an innate part of him. Are you sure you want them unprotected by not adding the innate power feat? Otherwise, if his powers were negated, he would loose them. I figure, the way you wrote it in your Background that they would be, but you didn'T pay for the power feat.

I noticed some mistakes on my character sheet, The Ghost, that need to corrected as well as wanting to spend my 8pps. First off, my total pps should be 117, not 120. It should be like this: Power Level: PL 8 (117 PPs) I would like to spend 4pps to increase his Def from +6 to +8. It should look like this: Combat: 12pps BAB: +2 Grapple: +2 BDB: +8 (+2 flat-footed) Knockback: -3, -0 without Force Field Initiative: +1 His saves have an error. His Reflex save needs to be changed. from +4(+1 Dex,+4) to +4(+1 Dex,+3). It should look like this: Saves: 8pps Toughness: +7 (+2 without Force Field) Fortitude: +4 (+2 Con, +2) Reflex: +4 (+1 Dex,+3) Will: +4 (+1 Wis, +3) I would like to spend his last 4pps to increase his Probability array from 6 ranks to 7 ranks. This raises his Blast from 5 to 6 as well. It should look like this: Powers: 58 (See below for descriptors) Concealment 8 (all visual, auditory, radio; Flaw: Limited to Machines) 8pps Force Field 5 (Extra: Duration/Continuous; PF: Subtle) 11pps Probability Control 7 (PF: 1 Alternate Power) 29pps AP: Blast 6 (Extras: Penetrating, Range/Perception; PFs: Indirect, Subtle, Variable Descriptor 2 [any coincidence]) Super Movement 3 (Permeate 2 [Half speed; Extra: Affects Others], Trackless 1 [Flaw]) 7pps Super-Senses 5 (Danger Sense [mental], X-ray vision (not through gold); Flaw: Limited/Only while Permeating for X-Ray Vision) 3pps This brings his totals up to 117/117 It should look like this: Costs: Abilities (12) + Combat (12) + Saves (08) + Skills (22) + Feats (05) + Powers (58) - Drawbacks (00) = Total Cost 117 / 117 Thanks.

Legend nodded his head. "Of course Mr. Belphegor. I hope you enjoy yourself." Once Belphegor walked into the room, Legend closed the outside door, leaving the demon to his task.

The Ghost thought for a while, trying to digest the information before asking any questions he might have. After a while he spoke. "And how do I get my payment? Will it be given to me once I hand over the information?" The ghost looked about making sure no was eavesdropping on his conversation. He had taken steps to ensure that he would have privacy, but it never hurt to be careful.

Legend smiled at the demon. "The help I offer is the chance to better yourself by understanding exactly what your limitations are as well as what you may excel in. Just recently, your companion who also failed, came here looking for a place where he could hone his skills. I am offering you that same opportunity. As for payment, I ask for nothing more than to have you continue your work within the city, Mr. Terhune." Legend begins walking ot the side door, not worrying to see if the demon would follow or not. As he walked he continued talking, his voice never fading nor increasing in volume. "Behind this door, you will find a corridor. Within the corridor are doors, doors that lead to various small rooms where your skills will be tested. For this visit, you may enter five such doors where you will be assigned a task. Each task will be atest of your abilities. Sometimes, they will test your strengths, while other times, they will test your weaknesses. Regardless of which door you enter, I'm sure you will learn something new about yourself." The elder gentleman opened the door to reveal al ong corridor with alternating doors on each side. The doors were unmarked and seemed identical. Only the present door stood out from the rest. "Once you have completed a room's task, you will be allowed to return to the corridor. There, you'll find refreshments waiting for you. Once you are ready, you can enter another door and begin the next task. Once you have entered five rooms, you will be finished an unable to enter another on this trip." Legend turned to Belphegor once again. "Well, Mr. Terhune, are you demon enough to face your own shortcomings?"

Stephanie's voice comes quickly over the speakers. "Hmm, it seems limited is an understatement. How long does it take to recharge? Also, were you able to replicate any of the targets' abilities? We don't have a way of determining that just yet. It seems your targeting system is fairly good for basic targets though."

Unfortunately, that isn't how you have the power written up. It does make for an interesting way of getting passed the limitation.

Legend smiled softly at the demon. "Yes, I did, Mr. Terhune. I've called you here since I've noticed you having a number of problems within the city. Your recent embarrassment at the Golden Calf casino being the largest." Legend gestures to the side, away from the main entrance that most of the villians use when visiting the Arena, to a lone door. "I believe I can help you realize your true untapped potential. That is, if you're willing to accept the help."

Are you going to continue to the second part? So far you've only done the first part of the stage. I asked for you to put in your post when you ran out of charges so there's no need to break now. He doesn'T get a refresher until the end of the stage.

Alan made marks on his clipboard as he listened to Chris's explination of his powers. When the teen was finished, Alan looked up from his clipbaord. "A healing, huh? That sounds like a very useful ability. Good." The teacher begins leading chris back intot he compound, explaining the test as he goes along. "Well, the test consists of five stages, each of which will test a different aspect of your ability or knowledge. Keep in mind that this is simply a placement test which means there is no pass or fail, but rather a determination of what you still need to improve on. It will also act as a point of what classes you'll be assigned." "Between stages, you'll be given time to relax and refresh your condition. Before the stages begin, the lights will flash and I will explain what you need to do. For the most part, it's a very painless process that allows you to understand your own shortcomings." Alan stopped before a door and regarded Chris. "Any questions before you head inside to begin?"

Archived due to inactivity. You can PM a Ref if you decide to return to this character.

Archived due to inactivity. You can PM a Ref if you decide to return to this character.

Looks good. Here's your first Approval. Now you get to wait until another Ref gets a look at your character.

The site doesn't call for play everyday. A few post every month is enough to play in the area. Also, we don't delete characters, we archive them so that if you find you have more time later, you can PM a Ref and we'll pull the character back out. For now, I'll archive the character in the off chance that you'll find time to come back and finish things up. Archived at player's request.

Okay, everything looks in order. I made some minor formatting edits on your sheet. You have your first Approval. Now you have to wait for another Ref to look things over.

Archived at Player's request.

Did you want to archive this character? I think the Refs have gotten confused as to what you wanted to do with this character. Once you let us know for sure, we can get teh process working again.

Sorry for the delay. Thanks for waiting. I'll try to handle everything in as few posts as possible. Description looks good. Background looks solid. I would guess either you were a big Angle fan or recently saw Twilight. But overall good concept. Let's get to the things that need to be fixed. Could you flesh out these complication in more details? It would help Refs pull them out to haunt you more. Stats are at 22pps, listed at 12. This needs to be fixed. Combats are at 42pps, listed at 42pp The damage section needs to be removed and placed in the Attack block at the bottom of the sheet. Please use the correct format for your sheet. It helps speed up the process. It should look like this: Reflex +total(+stat bonus, +bought ranks) Saves are at 9, listed at 13pp. This needs to be corrected. Skills are at 52r=13pp, listed at 13. Okay, but please list the total ranks and pp in the title. Feats are at 10, listed at 10pp. Again make sure to list the costs of indiviual powers. Powers are at 66; listed at 64pp. This needs to be changed.

Looks good. You are correct. I must have had a brain fart when I read it. You're good to go. Now on to the minions. Stats are at 20, listed at 20. Okay Combat are at 10, listed at 10. Okay Saves are at 9, listed at 9. Okay Skills are at 20r=5pp, listed at 20r=5pp. Okay Feats are at 13pp, listed at 16pp. Needs to be changed. Here's the problem, which is the same problem you had with the main character. You're pricing the Equipment feat at a much higher price than it should be. Equipment is 1 rank/1pp for 5eps, so with 4 ranks of Equipment, you get 20eps. Right now I'm counting, 4eps (Knife), 5eps (Sword), 6eps (full plate), and 7eps (Large shield) for a total of 22eps. This is assuming that all of the items are normal quality and not Masterwork. You need 5ranks of Equipment if you are going to keep all of these items giving you 3 ep more to spend. Now back to Ned. His minion feat is actually incorrect for what you have listed. You want 60pp Human followers. That's rank 4 Minion. Fanatical is an extra raising the cost of the feat to 1rank/2pp. That leaves you with 3 ranks for progression. Rank 5 Minion gives you 2 60pp characters. Rank 6 gives you 5 60pp characters. Rank 7 gives you 10 60pp characters. So you now have a choice. Leave it as is and take the extra six minions. Or you can lower the minions to Rank 6, giving you 5 minions and saving Ned 2pps to be used elsewhere. Also, as a warning. Posts of minions only will not count towards the monthly totals for the pp awards. Having flashbacks with the minions getting their orders from Ned, however, would count.