character edits Character Edits 2020

RocketLord · April 24, 2020

Doktor'd!

Spaceman

His grapple bonus for Move Object/Change Physical Distance is off! I'd forgotten that for Perception Range Move Object the Grapple Bonus is rank x2 and base attack doesn't apply, so, here's an updated Grapple Table.

Grapple Table	Total Score	Base Attack (BA)	Increase Molecular Space (IMS)	Infinite Reach + Spatial Strength (IR)	Change Physical Distance (CPD)
Values		+10	+10	+17	+28
BA	+10	+10
CPD	+28				+28
IMS	+20	+10	+10
IR	+27	+10		+17
IR+IMS	+37	+10	+10	+17

Exaccus · May 5, 2020

Doktor'd!

The Jovian

So i still have messed up but now my computer is behaving better im going to quickly drop a sheet in a spoiler and list the changes ive made for ease of transition

Lowered Base attack to +3

Added Attack focus (Melee) 4

Reduced Impervious toughness to 10

Reduced takedown 2 to 1

Replaced Affects insubstantial 2 with accurate 2 (+4) on Heat vision.

and thats it i think!

using all 182pp

Spoiler

Power Level: 12 (181/181PP)
Unspent Power Points: 0
Trade-Offs: -5 Attack / +5 Damage, -5 Defense / +5 Toughness

In Brief: Post-Human Colonist from the Moons of jupiter stranded in the modern day following a relativistic field collapse finds herself imbued with incredible powers beneath the light of the young sun thanks to her practically Alien bio-chemical make up and molecular density.

Catchphrase: None

Theme:

Alternate Identity:Aliza Zhara (assumed name) (Secret) Alhizhara (Birth name)(Secret)
Birthplace: Jovian Colonies (Europa)

Residence: Freedom City
Base of Operations:
Occupation: Deep Sea Farm Maintenance Staff (3rd class) (Former), Journalist and blogger/Vlogger.(currently)
Affiliations: Staff of the Freedom City Herald Newspaper.
Family: N/A.

Description:
Age: 29 (DoB: 1.5 billion Years in the future. )
Apparent Age: Young Adult
Gender: Female
Ethnicity: Jovian (Europa Colony)
Height: 6'4"
Weight: 189lbs
Eyes: Purple cyclopean eye (True form), Dark brown (Hologuise)
Hair: Black

In her true form Aliza bears passing resemblance to a judeo-christian demon in part thanks to her thick, resilient skin and prominently large hollow horns, her singular central eye and pointed teeth do little to make her appear less threatening, due to her Cellular Carapace her skin has a pigmentless white colour and her finger end in seemlessly smooth claws. Wild but well maintained black hair reaches down to the Base of her spine only publicly seen in this form when acting as a super hero Aliza favors more rugged and utilitarian clothes, primarily those composed of morphic molecules or other smart materials capable of self repairing through some means such as full body suits and boots.

Her morphic disguise is designed to both be less stressful for her ancestors to look upon with Rich golden brown skin, Dark brown eyes and shorter more stylized hair, as this form is largely a fashion statement in itself she tends to opt for nicer (If quaint in her opinion) wardrobe options, Smart casual for the most part with mainly comfort in mind; dresses are saved for special occasions.

History:

Born in an artifical birthing pod some 1.5 billion Years in the future ahlizhara was brought into a world that was struggling to hold onto it's place in the universe, with the death of earth following Sols expansion into a red giant much of earths historic relics and records were lost along with the Mercury and Venus Colonies and their valuable energy production facilities as well as the knowledge of how to construct the most advanced of post-humanities technologies, far more important it was that they were able to repair and maintain what was left than it was to learn those lost secrets anew that Alhizhara was quickly inducted into work as maintainace staff on several of the Colonies most important facilities, such as the artifical gravity generators that made functioning on the small moon easier than it would've otherwise been, the great fusion reactors that provides power to the Colonies homes and perhaps the most important of all, the deep sea farms where the majority of the Jovian Colonies food was grown and reared.

though she lacked the raw aptitude some of her peers held for the technological innovations of the ancient past she proved diligent and dedicated to her task over the years to the point she was largely trusted with day to day operations such as monitoring the isopod and crustacean pens, Krill paddocks and Plankton Bays without too much intreferable, though it was hardly a glamorous career it afforded her perhaps some of the rarest commodities available, time to herself and privacy.

It was a day like anyother after a long shift of plugging leaks and replacing fuses and contact plates at the deep sea Farm that the alert went out, one of the gravity generators was giving off anomalous readings and causing strange phenomena for a good kilometer or two around it, making the air ripple and sounds and sights garbled by twisting space time, perhaps more perculiar still were the reports of water flowing backwards against all known laws of fluid and thermodynamics, all available maintained workers of classes 3rd through 1st were to attend and attempt to stablize the monolithicly important machine.

Arriving amidst the chaos of confused repair staff and terrified bystanders ahlizhara was quickly put to work by her superiors on ensuring that the structural integrity of the device's main conduit held against its own rampant fluctuations as others scrambled to stablize the machines graviton pulses.

Perhaps it was due to interference from the distorted gravity or maybe she just wasn't important enough to be warned but having decided to do a controlled Surge to reset the capacitors ahlizhara found herself caught in a wave of space warping energy.

To the onlooking Jovians it must've seemed as if the sheer intesity of the gravitonium pulse anihillated her down to the very corners of her atoms as she vanished without a sound or any trace in an instant.

The truth is as always stranger than whatever fictions they might've held, instead of being torn asunder or crushed into a singularity by the wave of gravity she had instead been flung away at speeds in which physics as we understand it stopped working tossing her millions of miles across space and over a billion years into the past.

Personality & Motivation:

Aliza is in part due to her life in the post collapse solar system something of a selfless individual who took a menial job on a graveyard shift for the good of her Colony over chasing personal aspirations and whilst she is genetically diverged enough from modern humanity to practically be another species she is culturally and mentally similar enough to empathise fully with her distant ancestor species and is motivated to help where she can even if she has to temper herself against altering what she believes to be the ancient past.

though she finds current earth to be technology primative compared to her own time she rather enjoys the greater cultural richness and oppertunities available to her in the 20th century and has indulged herself in fashion and pop culture to an extent in which she has made a profession writing and vlogging about it.

Powers & Tactics:

Aliza makes use of fairly simple techniques such as simple palm strikes, punches, relying on her incredible strength and speed rather than training or skill.

Preferring to incapacitate weaker opponents by encasing them in thick ice with her freeze breath, remove or reduce the number of opponents with more forceful super breath and utilise her heat vision against constructs and objects.

Power Descriptions:

As a Jovian aliza is the product of post human directed evolution to thrive in the harsh enviroment of post collapse Colony on the moon of Europa these include a hardened Phisiology Consisting of a Cellular carapace that renders her skin tougher than most modern day metals but as flexible as human skin, as well as significantly denser muscules and bones as well as a layer of thick fat built to withstand the scouring ice storms of the frozen moon.

the ability to respire with miniscule amounts of oxygen and a hyper efficient metabolism to combat the poor nutritional value of plankton and Krill to resist the heat and radiation of unfiltered red sunlight

Posessing large hollow horns in place of ears that allow her to accurately locate sounds in her immediate surroundings thanks to the resilience of her cells and the hardness of her bones these are also functional if largely unused natural weapons

Aliza's super powers come from her ability to absorb and metabolize sunlight into metabolic energies, as a side effect this gives her a particularly powerful bioelectric aura that acts as a hardend skin tight forcefield as well and further reinforcing her Phisiology and biochemistry.

She can use this energies to vastly increase her strength by supercharging her muscular tissues to such a fine degree she is able to exercise it fully with the subtlest and smallest of motions (represented by the subtle and precise power Feats on Enhanced strength) and give her the ability to leap incredible distances

She can further use this strength to compress vast volumes of air within her lungs to project as explosive blasts of air or freezing gusts that can quickly engulf a creature in thick ice by freezing the ambient moisture in the air around them

Focusing the energy into her nervous tissues she can increase her Speed and Quickness moving at close to mach 13 and able to accomplish tasks that would take 3 months within mere seconds.

Focusing this energy into the photo-receptors of her eye to channel vast amounts of absorbed light into beams of heat so intense that they create visible beams of violet or red light (though with sufficient focus these be rendered purely ultra-violet or infrared)

On top of these powers she has access to the advanced technology of her time (which survived the collapse at least.) Inn particular a personal computing device that functions similarly to a smart device, after being stranded in the past by the relativistic field collapse this devices has been completely put into creating the morphic field that she uses to maintain her human appearance via the overclocking of a cosmetic application.

Complications:
Solar powered: The more fantastic of Aliza's powers derive from her ability to absorb and store solar radiation in her cells (specifically the "Solar Energy Battery", "Solar Powered Physiology.", "Solar charged biochemistry" and "Bio-Electric aura" powers) a gm might award Aliza a Hero point if her stores deplete to the point that those powers cease to function or if exposure to the energies that make up solar radiation in different forms (such as infrared or ultraviolet light, ) cause her powers to function in unexpected ways or she becomes overcharged and forced to uncontrollably Expell the excess energies.

Eye of jupiter: Due to having only one eye Aliza is particularly vulnerable to effects that work off or affect her visual senses such as dazzles and sense dependant effects that operate through eye contact, the GM might award Aliza a Hero point by making her automatically fail her saves against such effects or increasing the effects of failures beyond the regular scope of the power in question.

Trapped in the stone age: Aliza is from the extremely distant future from a time in which humanity has left the earth and colonised the solar system and as such is from as very different technological and cultural than mosy of modern day earth. The GM might award Aliza a Heropoint for having her misinterpreting certain social cues and interactions or being confounded by and unable to make use of the technology more advanced than simple mechanical devices like door knobs and ballpoint pens. Assuming she doesn't destroy them with her unfamiliar new strength.

Morphaguise: Originally a cosmetic Morphic overlay device Aliza has repurposed it into a rudimentary disguise both so that she can minimize the distress her true appearance may cause and so that she can live a relatively normal life and maintain social relationships. The GM might award Aliza a Hero point if her disguise should malfunction in some way at such a time that would make social interactions fail or impossible to undertake or it is stolen and used for malicious purposes.

Abilities: 10+0+10+0+4+0 = 24pp

STR: 20/44 (+5/+17)

DEX:10 (+0)

CON:20/30 (+5/+10)

INT:10 (+0)

WIS:14 (+2)

CHA:10 (+0)

Combat : 6 + 6 =12pp

Attack: +3

Melee: +7

Ranged: +3 (heat vision: +7)

Defense: +7

-Base Defense: +3

-Flatfooted: +2

Initiative: +0

Grapple: +12 (+5 STR +7 melee attack) without powers/ +29 (+17 STR +7 Melee attack bonus +5 Super strength) With amazing might/ +39 (+17 STR +7 Melee attack bonus +15 Super Strength) with amazing might + Energy reserves dedicated to SS

Saves: 0+6+8 = 14pp

Toughness: +17 (+10 Con +7 Protection)

-Impervious 12

Fortitude: +10 (+10 Con +0)

Reflex: +6 (+0 Dex +6)

Will: +10 (+2 wisdom +8)

Skills: 10pp (40 ranks)

Knowledge (physical sciences) 8 (+8)

Knowledge (technology) 8 (+8)

Language 4 (Base: Jovian, English, Latin, Lor, Galstandard)

Medicine 4 (+6)

Notice 8 (+10)

Sense Motive 8 (+10)

Feats: 18pp

Attack Focus Melee 4

All-Out Attack

Dodge Focus 4

Evasion 2

Interpose

Luck 3

Move-by Action

Power Attack

Takedown Attack 1

Powers: 10 + 7 + 2 + 25 + 1 + 7 + 43 + 10 = 104pp

Impervious Toughness 10("Bio-electric Aura"; Alien, Bio-Electricity) [10pp]

Protection 7 ("Cellular Carapace";Alien Biology, Cellular +7 Toughness) [7pp]

Super-Senses 2("Echolocation Horns"; Alien Biology; accurate: Hearing)[2pp]

Array 10(""Solar Energy Battery"; Alien biology; PFS: Dynamic Base Power, Dynamic Alternate Powers: 2) [25pp]
DBE: Enhanced Speed and Reflexes (Linked)
      Quickness 10 (Linked; Perform routine tasks at 2500x speed)
      Speed 10 (Linked; Speed: 10000 mph, 88000 ft./rnd)
DAE: Full Power (Super-Strength 10) +50 STR carry capacity, heavy load: 183.5k tons; +10 STR to some checks)
   DAE: Leaping 10 (Jumping distance: x2500)

Morph 1 ("Morphoguise Device"; Technology, Hologram; single appearance - human disguise, +5 Disguise; Extra: Duration (continuous); Flaws: Action (move))[1pp]

Immunity 7("Enviromental Adaptions"; Alien Biology; enviromental conditions (all), suffocation (all))[7pp]

Array 19("Solar powered Phisiology"; Alien biology; 38pp array; PFs: Alternate Power 4)[43pp]
BE: Amazing Might (Linked; Alien Biology)[38/38pp]
      Enhanced Strength 24 (Linked; +24 STR; PFs: Precise, Subtle (subtle))
      Enhanced Trait 2 (Linked; Feats: Second Chance (Strength checks to break objects), Ultimate Effort (Strength Check))
      Super-Strength 5 (Linked; +25 STR carry capacity, heavy load: 179.2 tons; +5 STR to some checks)
   AE: Freeze Breath (Snare 12; Alien biology; Cold) ( Extras: Cone Area (120 ft. cone - General), Selective Attack Flaws: Range (touch) PFs: Affects Insubstantial 2 (full power))[38/38pp]
   AE: Heat Vision (Blast 17; Alien Biology; Heat) (PFs: Precise, Subtle,(subtle)Accurate 2 (+4) )[38/38pp]
   AE: Precision Heat Vision (Blast 12; Alien Biology; Heat) (Array; DC 27; Extras: Range (perception);PFs: Precise, Subtle (subtle))[38/38pp]
   AE: Super-breath (Trip 12; Alien Biology, Air) (Extras: Cone Area (120 ft. cone - General), Knockback, Selective Attack; Flaws: Range (touch); PFs: Improved Throw, Precise)[38/38pp]

Enhanced Constitution 10 ("Solar charged Bio-Chemistry"; Alien Biology (+10 CON))[10pp]

Totals: Abilities 24 + Combat 12 + Saves 14 + Skills 10 (40 ranks) + Feats 18 + Powers 104 - Drawbacks 0 = 182/182

RocketLord · May 11, 2020

Doktor'd!

Forever Boy

A semi-major update, spending Pan's PP and moving things around!

The different parts from below the breakdown of the changes.

21PP to spend.

Combat

Increase Base Defense to 6, from 5. Too high Defense for PL will be fixed under feats. 2PP spent, 19PP left.

Saving Throws

Fortitude Save +2, to +10 total. 2PP spent, 17PP left.

Reflex Save +2, to +14 total. 2PP spent, 15PP left.

Skills

Drop the 4 ranks of Search. +1PP to spend, 16PP left.

Feats

Decrease Dodge Focus by 1, to rank 9. +1PP to spend, 17PP left.

Get rid of Grapple Finesse. +1PP to spend, 18PP left. This in turn changes the Grapple score under Combat to: Grapple: +8 (+6 Base Attack, +2 Strength

Get rid of Takedown Attack 2. +2PP to spend, 20PP left.

Get rid of 1 rank of Uncanny Dodge, removing the unnecessary Danger Sense from it. +1PP to spend, 21PP left.

Powers

Updating the descriptors a bit, and changing my notation a bit, as per the full sheet in the spoiler. Main points is getting rid of all Genetic descriptors (its covered by Alien) and the Psionic descriptors on Comprehend and Mind Reading, since that should be Magic.

Flight 5: Remove the Moving Feint power feat. +1PP to spend, 22PP left.

Luck Control: Increase to Rank 3, making it look like below. 6PP spent, 16PP left.

Luck Control 3 (Force Rerolls, Spend Hero Points for Others. Bestow Hero Points to Others; Feats: Luck 2) [11PP] (Descriptors: Forever Lucky, Luck)

Tricks Array: Increase to rank 14, updating individual powers in the array as below. 2PP spent, 14PP left.

Tricks Array 14 (28PP Array; Feats: Alternate Power 3) [31PP] (Descriptors: Tricks, Magic, Pixie Dust. Additional descriptors on individual powers)

BP: {27 + 1 = 28/28PP} (Descriptors: The Forever Weapon, Light, Precise Strikes, Slashing/Bludgeoning/Piercing Damage Type, Training, Weapons)

Damage 10 (Extras: Penetrating 5; Feats: Accurate, Extended Reach 2 [10 ft.], Improved Critical 2, Incurable, Mighty, Paralyzing Attack, Precise, Takedown Attack 2, Variable Descriptor 1 [Bludgeoning, Piercing, Slashing]) [27PP]

Feature 1 (Light Source) [1PP]

AP: Emotion Control 10 (Feats: Mind Blank, Reversible, Subtle 2) {24/28PP} (Descriptors: Powerful Emotions, Emotion)

AP: Illusion 6 (Affects All Senses; Extras: Duration 1 [Sustained]; Flaws: Action [Full Round]; Feats: Progression [Area] 2) (Duration: Sustained, Area: 25 ft. radius) (Stacks with Endless Forms) {26/28PP} (Descriptors: Forms Most Beautiful, Illusion)

Stacked Power: Illusion 10 (Affects All Senses; Extras: Duration 1 [Sustained]; Flaws: Action [Full Round]; Feats: Progression [Area] 6) (Duration: Sustained, Area: 500 ft. radius) (Descriptors: Endless Forms Most Beautiful, Illusion)

AP: Snare 10 (Feats: Accurate 2, Indirect 3, Subtle) {26/28PP} (Descriptors: Binding Shadow, Pan's Shadow, Grasping Shadows)

Trickster Array: Increase to rank 12, updating individual powers in the array as below. 4PP spent, 10PP left.

Trickster Array 12 (24PP Array; Feats: Alternate Power 3) [27PP] (Descriptors: Trickster, Magic, Pixie Dust. Additional descriptors on individual powers)

BP: Enhanced Charisma 20 {20/24PP} (Descriptors: Forever Charisma, Superhuman charisma)

AP: Flight 12 (stacks with Fairy Flight) {24/24PP} (Descriptors: Forever Flight, Flight)

Stacked Power: Flight 17 (2,500,000 MPH / 25,000,000 ft./rnd)

AP: Illusion 4 (Affects All Senses; Extras: Duration 1 [Sustained]; Flaws: Action [Full Round]; Feats: Progression [Area] 4) (Duration: Sustained, Area: 100 ft. radius) (Stacks with Forms Most Beautiful) {20/24PP} (Descriptors: Endless Forms, Illusion)

Stacked Power: Illusion 10 (Affects All Senses; Extras: Duration 1 [Sustained]; Flaws: Action [Full Round]; Feats: Progression [Area] 6) (Duration: Sustained, Area: 500 ft. radius) (Descriptors: Endless Forms Most Beautiful, Illusion)

AP: Obscure 6 (Affects Visual Senses; Extras: Independent [+0], Selective Attack, Total Fade) (Duration: Independent [20 rounds], Radius: 250 ft.) {24/24PP} (Descriptors: Hide & Seek, Illusion, Mists)

I'm leaving the last 10PP unspent.

Full blocks with updated changes below:

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Please update the top of the sheet to look like this:

FOREVER BOY

Power Level: 15

Effective Power Level: 10

Power Points: 239/249PP
Unspent Power Points: 10
Trade-Offs: +5 Defense / -5 Toughness, (The Forever Weapon) -2 Attack / +2 DC

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Please update appearance (including the picture) to this:

Pan is an attractive young man with messy dark red hair and green eyes. He has an athletic build, which he doesn’t mind showing with mostly form fitting clothing. Pan prefers green, white and red clothing, rarely wearing any dark colors. He almost always seem to be smiling.

In uniform, Pan wears a pair of green dark green pants, with green boots in the same dark green nuance. The boots have white piping that separate them from the pants, as well as a white stripe above the ankle and white soles. On his upper body, Pan wears a red t-shirt with a logo at a white heart interconnected with an infinity symbol on his chest. He wears an emerald green jacket over the t-shirt. The jacket is left open, with what appears as a thick white elongated square shape, revealing the interconnected heart and infinity symbol on the t-shirt. The jacket has white piping details in three strips on his shoulders and around his elbows, with thick white cuffs at his wrists. Pan wears an emerald green domino mask in the same color as his mask.

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And all the updated crunch, please mind the indents at the powers to make it more readable:

ABILITIES

4 + 16 + 6 + 4 + 2 + 10 = 42PP

Strength: 14 (+2)
Dexterity: 26 (+8)
Constitution: 16 (+3)
Intelligence: 14 (+2)
Wisdom: 12 (+1)
Charisma: 20 (+5) / 40 (+15)^{Forever Charisma}

COMBAT

12 + 12 = 24PP

Initiative: +12 (+8 Dex, +4 Improved Initiative)
Attack: +6 Base, +6 Melee, +6 Ranged, see Power attack bonuses in DC Block
Defense: +15 (+6 Base, +9 Dodge Focus), +3 Flat-Footed
Grapple: +8 (+6 Base Attack, +2 Strength)
Knockback: -1 / -3 (with Defensive Roll)

SAVING THROWS

7 + 6 + 9 = 22PP

Toughness: +5 (+3 Con, +2 Defensive Roll)

Fortitude: +10 (+3 Con, +7)

Reflex: +14 (+8 Dex, +6)

Will: +10 (+1 Wis, +9)

SKILLS

68R = 17PP

Bluff 15 (+20) / (+30)^{Forever Charisma}

Languages 1 (Native: Neverspeak; Learned: English)

Notice 14 (+15)^{Skill Mastery}

Sense Motive 14 (+15)^{Skill Mastery}

Sleight of Hand 12 (+20)^{Skill Mastery}

Stealth 12 (+20)^{Skill Mastery}

FEATS

37PP

Beginner's Luck

Challenge [Fast Feint]

Challenge [Fast Taunt]

Defensive Roll 1

Distract [Bluff]

Dodge Focus 9

Evasion 2

Fearless

Improved Initiative 1

Inspire 5

Jack-of-All-Trades

Leadership

Luck 3

Move-by Action

Setup

Skill Mastery (Notice, Sense Motive, Sleight of Hand, Stealth)

Taunt

Teamwork 3

Uncanny Dodge 2 [Auditory, Visual]

Enhanced Feats

Luck 3 -> Luck 5^{Forever Lucky}

Quick Change

Takedown Attack 2^{The Forever Weapon}

POWERS

8 + 1 + 10 + 1 + 5 + 11 + 2 + 31 + 27 + 3 = 99

Comprehend Rank 3 (Understand, speak and read all languages; Feats: Alternate Power 1, Selective) [8PP] (Descriptors: Universal Understanding, Alien, Magic)

AP: Mind Reading 10 (Flaws: Feedback, Limited to Surface Thoughts; Feats: Subtle 2) {6/7PP} (Descriptors: Tell Me What You Think, Alien, Magic, Training)

Enhanced Feat 1 (Quick Change) [1PP] (Descriptors: Forever Uniform, Magic, Pixie Dust)

Flight 5 (Flight speed: 250 MPH / 2500 ft./rnd) [10PP] (Descriptors: Fairy Flight, Flight, Magic, Pixie Dust)

Immunity 1 (Aging) [1PP] (Descriptors: The Forever Boy, Immortality, Magic, Pixie Dust)

Immunity 5 (Entrapment Effects [Snare, Grappling, Bonds]) [5PP] (Descriptors: Forever Free, Freedom, Magic, Pixie Dust)

Luck Control 3 (Force Rerolls, Spend Hero Points for Others. Bestow Hero Points to Others; Feats: Luck 2) [11PP] (Descriptors: Forever Lucky, Luck)

Quickness 4 (Flaws: One type [Mental]) (Able to perform mental tasks at x25 normal speed) [2PP] (Descriptors: Cleverness of Me, Alien, Quick Thinking)