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King of Suits (PL 13) - Arichamus (Bronze)


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There were some pretty severe math and terminology errors that I'm surprised were missed. I fixed them. You're 5PP overbudget.

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Also, there is no "Chinese" or "Indian" language. Since Mandarin and Hindi are the most commonly spoken languages in each of those respective nations, that's what I replaced them with. Feel free to tweak it however you want. (The only alternate suggestion I would have is maybe giving him Cantonese instead of, or in addition to, Mandarin, if he spent time in Hong Kong.)

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Okay, I think I'm back in budget, switched the Fool's Deck thing to a Device and removed the Obscure power from it.

The formatting errors I can't make any kind of excuse for.

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