Tsura Posted July 3, 2012 Posted July 3, 2012 Looking for Feedback Player Name: Tsura Character Name: La Luchadora Power Level: 10 Trade-Offs: +2 Toughness, -2 defense Unspent Power Points: 0 Progress To Bronze Status: 0/30 In Brief: (1-2 sentences which sum up the whole character) Alternate Identity: Theresa Estacada Identity: Secret Birthplace: Occupation: Affiliations: (People and/or groups you work with) Family: Description: Age: DoB: Apparent Age: (if applicable) Gender: Female Ethnicity: Spaniard Height: 6’4 Weight: 204 lbs Eyes: Aquamarine Hair: Aubern Power Descriptions: (Describe what their powers look like, if applicable) History: Personality & Motivation: Powers & Tactics: Complications: Name: Abilities: 6 + 4 + 6 + 0 + 4 + 4 = 24PP Strength: 30/16 (+10/+3) Dexterity: 14 (+2) Constitution: 30/16 (+10/+3) Intelligence: 10 (+0) Wisdom: 14 (+2) Charisma: 14 (+2) Combat: 12 + 8 = 20PP Initiative: +2 Attack: +6 Melee, +6 Ranged, +10 Unarmed Grapple: +26 Defense: +8 (+4 Base, +4 Dodge Focus), +2 Flat-Footed Knockback: -11/-21 Saving Throws: 0 + 6 + 7 = 13PP Toughness: +12 (+2) (+10 Con, +2, 10 Impervious) Fortitude: +10 (+2) (+10 Con, +0) Reflex: +8 (+2 Dex, +6) Will: +9 (+2 Wis, +7) Skills: 40R = 10PP Acrobatics* 8 (+10) Perform* (Oratory) 8 (+10) Intimidate* 7 (+9) Notice* 6 (+8) Knowledge (Business) 10 (+10) Language (Native Spanish, English) 1 Feats: 19PP Attractive Attack Specialization (Unarmed) 2 Benefit (Wealth 2) Dodge Focus 4 Chokehold Fascinate (Perform: Oratory) Fearless Improved Grab Improved Grapple Improved Pin Improved Throw Luck 2 Skill Mastery (Acrobatics, Perform (Oratory), Intimidate, Notice) Powers: 14+14+2+10+14+4+4+2= 63PP Enhanced Strength 14 [14PP] (Descriptive Name, Descriptors) Enhanced Constitution 14 [14PP] (Descriptive Name, Descriptors) Protection 2 [2PP] (Descriptive Name, Descriptors) Impervious 10 [10PP] (Descriptive Name, Descriptors) Super Strength 10 ( Feats:Bear Hug, Coming Through!, Muscle Tearing Grip, Shockwave ) [14PP] (Descriptive Name, Descriptors) Speed 4 [4PP] (Descriptive Name, Descriptors) Leaping 4 [4PP] (Descriptive Name, Descriptors) Enhanced Feat 2 ( Affects Insubstantial 2 (Applied to Strength)([2PP] (Descriptive Name, Descriptors) DC Block (see below) Totals: Abilities (24) + Combat (20) + Saving Throws (13) + Skills (10) + Feats (19) + Powers (64) - Drawbacks (0) = 150 Power Points
KnightDisciple Posted July 3, 2012 Posted July 3, 2012 Very solid overall. With your saves, you'd want to note the unpowered saved bonus for them; so Toughness would be +12/+5 (+10/+3 Con, +2 [Protection]). Fort would be similar. You might consider dropping Will by 1 or 2; unofficial rule of thumb is saves averaging PL-1. That said, I think if you feel there's a strong justification for 2 saves at 10...go for it! Certainly what I've gathered from your comments in chat tells me those are both strong saves for her. We try to mark the skills you have SM with, but I don't remember the formatting trick offhand. But that's purely formatting. Um...hm. I guess maybe type it as "Impervious Toughness 10"? 6 one way, half-a-dozen the other. Designate the native language, and give the # of ranks (likely "1"). Finally, if those feats are effectively Alternate Powers, I might suggest writing them out like that for easy reference. Otherwise, looks good!
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