Valcili Posted June 4, 2014 Posted June 4, 2014 (edited) Player Name: (Valcili)Character Name: Valentine CooperPower Level: 150/153PPTrade-Offs: +1 Att/-1DC -2 Defense / +2 ToughnessUnspent Power Points: 3Progress To Bronze Status: 3/30 In Brief: An unnaturally short yet proportional female of unusual ageless beauty, eloquent as white Porcelain yet tough as iron. Alternate Identity:Identity: Baby Brawler (A.K.A BB, BABs) (Public)Birthplace: San Diego, CAOccupation: InvestorAffiliations: N/AFamily: Mother deceased/Father deceased Description:Age: 25Apparent Age: Late teens to early adulthoodGender: FemaleEthnicity: Mixed/Caucasian (dominant)Height: 4’Weight: 200 lbsEyes: BlueHair: White with a light tinge of blue Vary short but perfectly proportional, unusually young looking, beautifully eloquent with Porcelain white skin, she has exotic features. White hair with a light tinge of blue that highlights the white of her skin, she dresses in the modern young generation style incorporating twist of steam. Power Descriptions: Valentine is a mutant human with her bone and muscles more tightly weaved than other people, this compressed state has caused her to be much smaller in stature but immensly stronger and tougher.History: Valentine never knew her mother, she was told many stories about her from her father but the one that stuck with her the most was how had passed away during child birth. Valentine had always been a unique child. Assumed to be pre-mature at child birth due to her small size, she was in the 1 percentile for size. However she was oddly in the extreme opposite the 100 percentile in the weight category. This created the complications during birth. Valentine is daughter to a single father who was a Marine Corps Special forces Combat instructor. She traveled the world with him as he was sent to different parts of the world for his tours of duty. Ever since she was old enough to comprehend the reasoning behind what her father did, she had wanted to follow in in his footsteps of doing something as full filling as training troops in preparation to protect her country. She has asked her father to teach her the say things that he taught to his students and he obliged her request. Her father had to adjust his training methods for her to compensate for her tiny size but the training he provided to Valentine taught her to be a skilled combatant, tough, confident while at the same time strengthening their bond. She had always been much smaller than everyone else but very heavy and strong, her pale skin and naturally white hair made her appear fare and frail. This is something that her father had picked up on early in their training. Increasing is interest in her training and adjusting his training style to improve her strengths and focus on improving her weaknesses (height and short reach). She had soon become a black belt in martial combat. By the age of ten Valentine was smart as a whip, tough as iron, quick as a viper, graceful as a swan, and as beautiful as the sunset but she was still shorter by far than anyone else her age. She finally accepted the fact she was different and would have to deal with an unusually small height issue the rest of her life. But her beauty, acrobatic and martial prowess made her well known and popular among all her friends. At thirteen she started high school and joined a MMA league that some of her fellow martial arts classmates and friends had been attending. She was an active body at her school promoting the benefits that martial arts disciplines provided and held a high average GPA. Seventeen… her father is sent out on deployment for the third time to the war in the east and Valentine moves in with her best friend for the third time. On her graduation day, Valentines father has not returned from deployment as she had hoped. Instead she receives with a letter delivered by a uniformed stranger stating that her father has succumbed to injuries from an attack on his patrol. Orphaned and grief stricken she turns her anger inward and channels it in to focused efforts in her training. Her love for the service lost buried with her beloved father. By this time she reaches adulthood, eighteen, Valentine has gone undefeated (save for her father) and is considered a great and powerfully unique fighter with her weight, height and quickness being her advantage. Valentine picks up a scholarship in martial arts and completes college. An incident occurs against three assailants during her years in college in which she discovers the full extent of her abilities and uses them to her advantage defeating them with startling ease. It was during this time she fully understood the message from her father during their final meeting. Taking to heart and making a Vow, Valentine now dedicates her life to fighting injustice and defending the weak. Personality & Motivation: Valentine a complex individual, one minute she is a typical young woman, next she is an explosive fireball. No matter what state she is always ready to defend someone in need. She has taken up the mantel of super hero for two main reasons, one: an internal sense of response ability to defend those in need (Those with the power to defend the weak are thus responsible to do so) and two: She loves a good fight (you learn best though self-experience…..what better way to learn to fight than to do so.). Powers & Tactics: Valentine is a typical brawler, she does her best work bare knuckled (knees, feet, hands and elbows. Fast and small, she takes advantage of this by leaping at her opponents. Unsuspecting of her heavy frame she will come crashing down on them with fists flying. Complications:Explosive: Cramming so much potential into such a tiny container is bound to cause issues, at random times Valentine will explode into an uncontrolled range which quickly subsides with the emotional release of all that compressed pent up power. Morally obligated: Valentine feels it is her responsibility as well as others to protect those in danger.Publicly Known: The extremeness of her features is so unique that it is impossible to maintain a secret Identity no matter how much you try. Thus every known associate and loved one is in danger of being used against her. Renown: Valentine is on par with semi famous TV actors. Easily recognized in her local regions and frequently recognized abroad. This makes it very difficult at times to keep a low profile if ever she needed. Abilities: 6 + 6 + 18 + 2 + 4 + 2 = 38PP Strength: 16/28 (+9) Dexterity: 16 (+3) Constitution: 28 (+9) Intelligence: 12 (+1) Wisdom: 14 (+2) Charisma: 12 (+1) Combat: 10 + 8 = 18PP Initiative: +7 Attack: +5 (+4 Base, +1 Size) +9 Melee, +11 (unarmed), +6 Ranged Grapple: +18 (-4 shrink, ) Defense: +8 (+4 Base, +1 Size, +3 Dodge Focus), +3 Flat-Footed Knockback: -13 Saving Throws: 5 +7 +8 = 20PP Toughness: +12 (+10 Impervious) (+9 Con, +3 [Density]) Fortitude: +14 (+9 Con, +5) Reflex: +10 (+3 Dex, +7) Will: +10 (+2 Wis, +8) Skills: 60R = 15PP Acrobatics 10 (+13) Climb 1 (+4) Computers 1 (+2) Diplomacy 4 (+5) Drive 1 (+4) Intimidate 16 (+15) Knowledge: current events 1 (+2) Knowledge: Business 2 (+3) Knowledge: Streetwise 2 (+3) Notice 8 (+10) Search 1 (+2) Sense Motive 8 (+10) Stealth 2 (+9) Survival 2 (+4) Swim 1 (+4) Feats: 27PP Attack focus (Melee) 3 Attack specialization (Unarmed) 1 Benefit (wealth) 1 Blind-Fight Chokehold Dodge focus 3 Elusive Target Evasion Favored Opponent (Martial Arts Master) Hide in Plain Sight Improved critical (unarmed) 19-20 Improved Grapple Improved initiative 1 Improved Pin Instant Up Move-By-Action Startle Stunning Attack Takedown Attack. Second Chance (Unarmed Strike) Second Chance (Spot Feints) Uncanny Dodge (Visual) Up the Walls Powers: 23+7+1+1 =32 PP Impervious 7 [7PP]Leaping 1 [1PP] (Running 26FT, Standing, 13FT, High 6FT)Shrinking 6 (Extras: Compression, Duration (Continuous); Flaws: Permanent; Feats: Normal Movement, Normal Toughness, Innate, Buoyant, subtle) [23PP] (+1 ATK/DEF, -4 Grapple, +4 Stealth, -2 Intimidation, +12 Str, +3 toughness, Immovable 2, Super Strength 2 (heavy load 2.4 tons), X5 mass) Speed 1 [1PP] Drawbacks: (-0) + (-0) = -0PP DC BlockATTACK RANGE SAVE EFFECT DESCRIPTOR Unarmed Touch Toughness DC24 Damage (Physical) Stunning strike Touch Fort DC19 Damage (Physical) Totals: Abilities (38) + Combat (18) + Saving Throws (20) + Skills (15) + Feats (27) + Powers (32) - Drawbacks (0) = 150/153 Power Points Edited July 23, 2014 by AvengerAssembled June 2014
Supercape Posted June 9, 2014 Posted June 9, 2014 APPROVED! Could do with a few tidy ups format wise, but nothing to moan about!
Avenger Assembled Posted June 10, 2014 Posted June 10, 2014 hah-hah, I just wanted to make sure Baby Brawler was a brawler who looked like a baby, rather than one that fights with babies! I really like this concept and these powers. I would like you to fix the skills formatting to match that of our other sheets, as that's the only non-standard thing that makes it tough to read. you should also work out her Leaping distance so you'll know it for threads.
Valcili Posted June 13, 2014 Author Posted June 13, 2014 Yes AA, she is just a short girl thus the name Baby and she like to brawl, the named seemed appropriate. The original concept was designed by me for my wife she had asked me to make a female PC in City of Heroes. We liked it a lot and so I adopted it for this game. Per your request, I have fixed the formatting in the “Skills†section, I have added the distances to the leaping for reference, and fixed the issue with the swapped bonuses in the “Saves†section as well. I think that was all that was needed, please give it a once more over and let me know if it is good to go or if I need to make another alteration…. Thanks for your time.
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