Thevshi Posted April 29, 2008 Posted April 29, 2008 Heritage, I would point out a big error in your posts about Velocity. In costume, she wears a brunette wig.
Heritage Posted April 29, 2008 Author Posted April 29, 2008 Heritage, I would point out a big error in your posts about Velocity. In costume, she wears a brunette wig. Oh really? I thought she was a brunette who wears a blond wig, based on the picture on your sheet :oops: Well, I'll have to edit it a bit, I guess...
Heritage Posted April 29, 2008 Author Posted April 29, 2008 Man, I wished I'd known that! I feel so dumb, and I have to change a lot of the post to make it work now; on the plus side, Grim might be slightly less hostile towards Velocity, unless she finds out she's an actual blond :P
Thevshi Posted April 29, 2008 Posted April 29, 2008 Yeah, that picture was more done to show what the main part of her costume looked like that what she completely looked like in costume. I have worked a bit on an full version, but never finished it. I’ll get a in-costume description added to her sheet to prevent future confusion.
Heritage Posted April 29, 2008 Author Posted April 29, 2008 Okay, I updated the posts, and abused my judge's powers to edit Grim's quote in Shadowboxer's post to make it match; I hope all parties are okay with it as it now stands.
Heritage Posted April 30, 2008 Author Posted April 30, 2008 I can't think of anything else to write; as far as I'm concerned, we can close this one up, unless you have anything else you want to add, SB.
Shadowboxer Posted April 30, 2008 Posted April 30, 2008 Okay, I updated the posts, and abused my judge's powers to edit Grim's quote in Shadowboxer's post to make it match; I hope all parties are okay with it as it now stands. No problem. I would have done the same. I can't think of anything else to write; as far as I'm concerned, we can close this one up, unless you have anything else you want to add, SB. You're right. We accomplished what we set out to do. I can write the final post and we can leave it that. We were planning the undercover segment of the story by PMing each other so maybe we can move forward with that?
Heritage Posted April 30, 2008 Author Posted April 30, 2008 You're right. We accomplished what we set out to do. I can write the final post and we can leave it that. We were planning the undercover segment of the story by PMing each other so maybe we can move forward with that? Oops, I posted one last one anyway; oh well, they have nice symetrical exits now. I will PM you later today, and we'll go from there. Thanks for making that fun and interesting, more than just moving the plot forward. :)
Shadowboxer Posted April 30, 2008 Posted April 30, 2008 My pleasure. That was very enjoyable. I think introducing some conflict into their relationship is needed at this point, if only to rachet up the tension when Grim makes the big reveal about you-know-who. I'll respond to your PM ASAP. Most likely tonight or tomorrow morning my time.
Barnum Posted May 6, 2008 Posted May 6, 2008 It looks like you guys are done here. Can I close things up?
Heritage Posted May 7, 2008 Author Posted May 7, 2008 It looks like you guys are done here. Can I close things up? Yeah, go ahead.
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