DJShockWave Posted June 5, 2016 Posted June 5, 2016 (edited) Here is the Finished sheet Monolith Power Level: 10 (150/150PP) Unspent Power Points: 0 Trade Offs:Blast +2/-2 In Brief: A dense but quicklearning rockhead who loves nothing more than fighting villains with some pals Catchphrase:none Theme:none Identity: Public Birthplace: Halvaria Residence: Freedom city Base of Operations:none Occupation:Student Affiliations: none Family:none living Age: 250 ( Born: 1766 14th of February.) Apparent Age:20 Gender:male Ethnicity: Halvarion Height:6’3 Weight:150 Eyes:green Hair:brown Description: Monolith is always doing his part around freedom city so he wears some armour incase his other defences fail. Under the armour he tends to wear a green t shirt with a black jacket and black jeans. History: Born on Halvaria In orbit of a distant star, Valarious was the 6th child of a pollitian by the name of larus and his wife Ondera amidst a golden age of his peoples society, hunger, proverty and illness had at last been vanquished and mortality was quick to follow, it was at the peak of there greatest society that disaster befell them; A massive fleet of warships appeared in the sky and with no prior warning or provocation began bombarding the planet, though powerful terrakinetics, the halvarain were powerless to fight the orbiting ships lacking the means to engage them outside their planets atmosphere; though they proved much to hardy to be conquered and their attackers opted to instead raze the entire planet; it was duiring this dark hour that the halvarain minister of science revealed an experimental space colonization project, the life pod program; small and hardy ships that would carry their young through the stars to habbitable planets, whilst teaching machines within the craft would teach them of their culture and home and so as the oceans boiled, the skys burned and the land itself began to melt from the merciless hail of plasma a dozen points of brilliant light errupted from the planets blackend atmosphere and scattered the last generation of native halvarains to the furthest reaches of the galaxy. It took Valarious 230 years to reach his pods destination, the blue green world of earth landing in the middle of the russian wilderness he was found by Dimitri Kazov and his wife Natalia Retrieving the Infant from his Stasis Capsule and raising him as their own son,Given the name Peter Kazov he had a good childhood,working on his parents land though a somewhat solitary man, he found himself listless and upon discovering his origins he decided to head to freedom city in the united states of america to pursue his past and his unfolding destiny. Personality & Motivation: He fights for the safety of those who need protecting and on the way he hopes to find his halvarain brothers and sisters Powers & Tactics: He likes to charge in head first making a plan on the way but if there are other heros then he will try a plan with them and adapt to a situation Power Descriptions: The appearance of the way he uses his power is hard to describe Complications: All life is precious from the biggest elephant to the smallest ant Abilities: 14+0+12+0+4+4 = 34pp Strength: 24 (+7) Dexterity: 10 (+0) Constitution: 22 (+6) Intelligence: 10 (+0) Wisdom: 14 (+2) Charisma: 14 (+2) Combat: 6 + 6 = 12pp Attack: +6 Base (+10 Melee//+6 range/+12 Earthen Blast) Defense +10 (6 base +4 Dodge focus) Flatfooted:+3 Initiative +0 Hero points 1 Saving Throws 6 + 0 + 8 = 14PP Toughness: +10(+0 Con, +0 Fortitude: +8 (+6 Con, +2) Reflex: +6 (+0 Dex, +6) Will: +10 (+2 Wis, +8) Skills :32r = 8pp Diplomancy 6 (+8) Knowledge (Earth Sciences) 4 (+4) Knowledge (History) 3 (+3) Knowledge (Life Sciences) 3 (+3) Knowledge (Theologyand philosophy) 1(+1) Language 3 (Base: Halvarain; Galstandard, English, Russian) Notice 6 (+8) Sense Motive 6 (+8) Feats: 12pp Attack Focus (melee) 4 Dodge Focus 4 Moveby Action Power Attack Takedown Attack 2 Equipment: none Powers: 22 + 4 + 2 + 3 + 8 + 4 + 3 +10 = 56pp Array 10("Terrakinetic"; Alien, Earth; 20pts; PF:Alternate Power 2) [22PP] -BP: Blast 8("Earth Blast"; PF: Accurate 3 (+6) Variable Descriptor: Earthen) [20pp] --AP::Create Object 6("Earthen Constructs"; Extras:Duration (continouis) Innate, Precise)[1pp} --AP: Teleport 9(TerraPort"; 900ft as a move action; 20,000 Miles as a full action;Extras: Accurate Flaws: Medium (Stone) PF:Easy, Progression Mass (250lbs))[1pp] Damage 3("Mountain Fist" PF:Mighty)[4pp] Force Field 2("Stoneskin";+2 Toughness)[2pp} Immunity 3("Halvarain Phisiology"; Age, Disease, Poison) [3pp] Impervious Toughness 8("Stone Bones")[8pp] Protection 2("Haolvarain Resiliance" Extra: Impervious){4pp] Regeneration 1("Stone Reincarnation" Ressurection 1 (one week) PF: Persistent,Regrowth)[3pp] Super Strength 4("High Gravity Race" +20 str Heavy load: 5.8 tons PF: Ground Strike, Shockwave) [10pp] Attack Range Save Effect Unarmed Touch DC22 Toughness Damage Dust Knuckles Touch DC25 Toughness Damage Earth blast 80ft DC23 Toughness Damage Abilities: 34pp Combat:24pp Saves:16pp Skills 8pp Fe Edited June 26, 2016 by DJShockWave Improved the original post as asked
Gizmo Posted June 6, 2016 Posted June 6, 2016 DJ, look at any other character sheet on the site to see how you're expected to submit one or better yet review the Player Guide. A downloadable attachment is not the way to go. You might also be better served by posting in the Character Building section of the forum first if you think you've made mistakes. That's the area for advice and feedback; the Character Bank is more finished, polished character sheets.
DJShockWave Posted June 6, 2016 Author Posted June 6, 2016 17 hours ago, Gizmo said: DJ, look at any other character sheet on the site to see how you're expected to submit one or better yet review the Player Guide. A downloadable attachment is not the way to go. You might also be better served by posting in the Character Building section of the forum first if you think you've made mistakes. That's the area for advice and feedback; the Character Bank is more finished, polished character sheets. Thanks for the advice I will do that
DJShockWave Posted June 8, 2016 Author Posted June 8, 2016 Here is the Finished sheet Monolith Power Level: 10 (150/150PP) Unspent Power Points: 0 Trade Offs:Blast +2/-2 In Brief: A dense but quicklearning rockhead who loves nothing more than fighting villains with some pals Catchphrase:none Theme:none Identity: Public Birthplace: Halvaria Residence: Freedom city Base of Operations:none Occupation:Student Affiliations: none Family:none living Age: 250 ( Born: 1766 14th of February.) Apparent Age:20 Gender:male Ethnicity: Halvarion Height:6’3 Weight:150 Eyes:green Hair:brown Description: Monolith is always doing his part around freedom city so he wears some armour incase his other defences fail. Under the armour he tends to wear a green t shirt with a black jacket and black jeans. History: Born on Halvaria In orbit of a distant star, Valarious was the 6th child of a pollitian by the name of larus and his wife Ondera amidst a golden age of his peoples society, hunger, proverty and illness had at last been vanquished and mortality was quick to follow, it was at the peak of there greatest society that disaster befell them; A massive fleet of warships appeared in the sky and with no prior warning or provocation began bombarding the planet, though powerful terrakinetics, the halvarain were powerless to fight the orbiting ships lacking the means to engage them outside their planets atmosphere; though they proved much to hardy to be conquered and their attackers opted to instead raze the entire planet; it was duiring this dark hour that the halvarain minister of science revealed an experimental space colonization project, the life pod program; small and hardy ships that would carry their young through the stars to habbitable planets, whilst teaching machines within the craft would teach them of their culture and home and so as the oceans boiled, the skys burned and the land itself began to melt from the merciless hail of plasma a dozen points of brilliant light errupted from the planets blackend atmosphere and scattered the last generation of native halvarains to the furthest reaches of the galaxy. It took Valarious 230 years to reach his pods destination, the blue green world of earth landing in the middle of the russian wilderness he was found by Dimitri Kazov and his wife Natalia Retrieving the Infant from his Stasis Capsule and raising him as their own son,Given the name Peter Kazov he had a good childhood,working on his parents land though a somewhat solitary man, he found himself listless and upon discovering his origins he decided to head to freedom city in the united states of america to pursue his past and his unfolding destiny. Personality & Motivation: He fights for the safety of those who need protecting and on the way he hopes to find his halvarain brothers and sisters Powers & Tactics: He likes to charge in head first making a plan on the way but if there are other heros then he will try a plan with them and adapt to a situation Power Descriptions: The appearance of the way he uses his power is hard to describe Complications: All life is precious from the biggest elephant to the smallest ant Abilities: 14+0+12+0+4+4 = 34pp Strength: 24 (+7) Dexterity: 10 (+0) Constitution: 22 (+6) Intelligence: 10 (+0) Wisdom: 14 (+2) Charisma: 14 (+2) Combat: 6 + 6 = 12pp Attack: +6 Base (+10 Melee//+6 range/+12 Earthen Blast) Defense +10 (6 base +4 Dodge focus) Flatfooted:+3 Initiative +0 Hero points 1 Saving Throws 6 + 0 + 8 = 14PP Toughness: +10(+0 Con, +0 Fortitude: +8 (+6 Con, +2) Reflex: +6 (+0 Dex, +6) Will: +10 (+2 Wis, +8) Skills :32r = 8pp Diplomancy 6 (+8) Knowledge (Earth Sciences) 4 (+4) Knowledge (History) 3 (+3) Knowledge (Life Sciences) 3 (+3) Knowledge (Theologyand philosophy) 1(+1) Language 3 (Base: Halvarain; Galstandard, English, Russian) Notice 6 (+8) Sense Motive 6 (+8) Feats: 12pp Attack Focus (melee) 4 Dodge Focus 4 Moveby Action Power Attack Takedown Attack 2 Equipment: none Powers: 22 + 4 + 2 + 3 + 8 + 4 + 3 +10 = 56pp Array 10("Terrakinetic"; Alien, Earth; 20pts; PF:Alternate Power 2) [22PP] -BP: Blast 8("Earth Blast"; PF: Accurate 3 (+6) Variable Descriptor: Earthen) [20pp] --AP::Create Object 6("Earthen Constructs"; Extras:Duration (continouis) Innate, Precise)[1pp} --AP: Teleport 9(TerraPort"; 900ft as a move action; 20,000 Miles as a full action;Extras: Accurate Flaws: Medium (Stone) PF:Easy, Progression Mass (250lbs))[1pp] Damage 3("Mountain Fist" PF:Mighty)[4pp] Force Field 2("Stoneskin";+2 Toughness)[2pp} Immunity 3("Halvarain Phisiology"; Age, Disease, Poison) [3pp] Impervious Toughness 8("Stone Bones")[8pp] Protection 2("Haolvarain Resiliance" Extra: Impervious){4pp] Regeneration 1("Stone Reincarnation" Ressurection 1 (one week) PF: Persistent,Regrowth)[3pp] Super Strength 4("High Gravity Race" +20 str Heavy load: 5.8 tons PF: Ground Strike, Shockwave) [10pp] Attack Range Save Effect Unarmed Touch DC22 Toughness Damage Dust Knuckles Touch DC25 Toughness Damage Earth blast 80ft DC23 Toughness Damage Abilities: 34pp Combat:24pp Saves:16pp Skills 8pp Fe
Avenger Assembled Posted June 20, 2016 Posted June 20, 2016 Can you go ahead and edit your initial post with this one, Shockwave? And also clean up your formatting so it matches the sample sheets.
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