Chalupacabra Posted October 5, 2016 Posted October 5, 2016 (edited) Player Name: ChalupacabraCharacter Name: Doctor SparkPower Level: 10Trade-Offs: -2 Attack/+2 DamageUnspent Power Points: 0In Brief: Gadgeteer working with limited funds. Dedicated to fighting crime in the slums of Freedom City.Residence: House in The FensAlternate Identity: Jordan JeffersonIdentity: SecretBirthplace: Freedom CityOccupation: ConstructionAffiliations: None currentlyFamily: Parents James and Amber; Siblings Louis and JenniferDescription:Age: 25Gender: MaleEthnicity: African-AmericanHeight: 6'1"Weight: 178 lbsEyes: GreenHair: Black Reference pic to come Power Descriptions: Lasers, utility belts, and other tech gadgets, but without the sleekness and futuristic aesthetic usually associated with gadgeteers. All of Spark's tech is cobbled together and appears to built from junk and scrap. His laser blast and force field take the form of yellow-tinted electricity. History: Jordan Jefferson has always been an optimistic soul. Despite being born to a family that had lived in the slums of Freedom City for as long as any of them could remember, Jordan decided that he would make a better life for himself and his family. Throughout his school years, he threw himself wholeheartedly into his studies, especially the various fields of science that fascinated him. While his hard work and good grades looked to be building up for a promising college scholarship, he was struck by a bolt of lightning during his senior year of high school, leaving him in a coma for months. He woke up after the end of the school year. Returning to his studies with full fervor, he found that the material was coming to him more and more easily over time. Eventually it went beyond anything that he could explain as normal. Curious and a bit frightened, he turned his attention to researching medicine, hoping to find some explanation. After looking into it further, he could only determine that the lightning strike had supercharged his brain, expanding his mind beyond its previous limits. After several more months of increasing intellect, his mind had been boosted to truly superhuman levels. It was here that his optimistic nature kicked in again. After considering the implications of his new abilities, his thoughts turned to the many capes across Freedom. He thought of how much The Fens could improve if crime could be solved. He thought of how selfish it would be to use these abilities to improve his own station rather than for the city around him. And so he decided from this point he would join in the ranks of superheroes. He chose to forego college, worried that he would not be able to keep his supernatural intellect under wraps and that it would be a distraction from his new calling in life. Instead, to the befuddlement of his family, he began working in construction. Something that would allow him to pay his own way in life while still leaving him enough time to patrol the streets. It took years of scrounging, buying from junkyards, and meeting with the sort of people who recover dropped parts from super-fights, but he eventually was able to McGuyver together enough gear that he was ready to adopt his new identity as Doctor Spark. Personality & Motivation: In his regular identity, Jordan usually keeps to himself. He follows the standard social niceties and makes every attempt to appear as an average Joe, but will keep to himself if given the option. As Doctor Spark, he isn't afraid to play up his role as a superhero, happily embracing the "cape" personality and any number of cliches that go with it.Powers & Tactics: While hardly helpless in a fight thanks to his laser pistol and force field generator, Spark prefers if it doesn't come to a fight. When dealing with gangs and hoodlums in The Fens, he would generally attempts to intimidate them into an easy surrender, using his utility belt to distract and disable his foes if it comes to a fight. When fighting larger-scale villains, he prefers to take a back-line role, providing support through information or taking shots from a distance with his laser.Complications:The Good Inside You: Spark is possibly a bit too trusting when it comes to people he believes can still be redeemend. He is reluctant to escalate conflict or to see harsh punishment inflicted on the bad guys, usually believing that they can be rehabilitated and work for good.Struggling: While he has his own apartment in The Fens, it is all Jordan can do to remain afloat financially. Bargain Bin Tech: Spark doesn't have the greatest access to materials. His tech may not function at inopportune moments due to parts due to parts failing. Abilities: 0+2+0+8+8+0=18PP Strength: 10 (+0) Dexterity: 12 (+1) Constitution: 10 (+0) Intelligence: 18/30 (+4/+10) Wisdom: 18 (+4) Charisma: 10 (+0) Combat: 16+20=36PP Initiative: +1 Attack: +8 Melee, +8 Ranged Grapple: +8 Defense: +10 (+5 Base, +5 Dodge), +5 Flat-Footed Knockback: -10 Saving Throws: 5+7+5=17 PP Toughness: +10(+0 Con, +10 Force Field) Fortitude: +5 (+0 Con, +5) Reflex: +8 (+1 Dex, +7) Will: +9 (+4 Wis, +5) Skills: 96R=24PP Computers 8 (+18) Skill Mastery Craft (Chemical) 8 (+18) Craft (electronic) 8 (+18) Skill Mastery Craft (mechanical) 8 (+18) Skill Mastery Disable Device 8 (+18) Skill Mastery Intimidate 5 (+5) Investigate 4 (+14) Knowledge (earth sciences) 3 (+13) Knowledge (life sciences) 5 (+15) Knowledge (physical sciences) 6 (+16) Knowledge (streetwise) 4 (+14) Knowledge (technology) 8 (+18) Notice 4 (+8) Search 3 (+13) Sense Motive 6 (+10) Stealth 8 (+9) Feats: 5PP Beginner's Luck Improvised Tools Inventor Luck 1 Skill Mastery (Computers, Craft (electronic), Craft (mechanical), Disable Device) Powers: 12+8+15+2+16=53PP *Enhanced Intelligence 12 [12PP] Device (Jetpack and Helmet, 10PP Container, Flaws: Hard to Lose)[8PP] (tech) *Flight 4 (100 mph)[8DP] *Super-Senses (Direction Sense, Distance Sense)[2DP] Device 5 (Laser Pistol, 25 PP Container, Flaws: Easy to Lose)[15PP] (tech,electricity) *Laser Setting (24PP Array; Feats: Alternate Power)[25DP] **Blast 12 **Dazzle 12 (Affects visual senses) Quickness 4 (10x speed, Flaws: Mental tasks only)[2PP] Device 4 (Repulsor Belt, 20 PP Container, Flaws: Hard to lose)[16PP] (tech, electricity) *Force Field 10 (Extras: Impervious) Drawbacks: -3PP = -3PPVulnerability (Electricity; Frequency: Common; Intensity: Moderate[x1.5])[-3PP] DC Block ATTACK RANGE SAVE EFFECT Unarmed Melee DC 15 Toughness Damage (Physical) Blast Ranged DC 27 Toughness Damage (Energy) Dazzle Ranged DC 22 Fort/Ref Dazzle Totals: Abilities(18)+Combat(36)+Saving Throws(17)+Skills(24)+Feats(5)+Powers(53)-Drawbacks(3)= 150/150 Power Points Edited October 6, 2016 by Chalupacabra
angrydurf Posted October 5, 2016 Posted October 5, 2016 Abilities: Good Combat: Minor format issues, 16 + 20 = 36PP is an easier to read format for +8 Base attack +10 Base Defense Defense Should Read: Defense: +10 (+10 base), + 5 Flat-Footed Knockback should be -10 Saves: Good but See Powers Skills: Good Feats: Good Powers: Powers do not add up: Should be 12+8+15+2+20= 57 More readable if Device powers and arrays are indented under the broader heading and Powers are Bolded. Force field 12 is overcaps for PL 10 with 10 defense. You recorded an appropriately capped 10 toughness in the Saves section so you and calculated your PP like you spent 16 on it so I think the intention is to buy rank 10 impervious force field for 20DP in a rank 4 Device with 20DP for 16PP. So clean those up and you should be good. Concept looks pretty solid as well, Nice to see a gadgeteer that is not a bajillionaire.
Avenger Assembled Posted October 11, 2016 Posted October 11, 2016 Can you bold the powers and more fully denote their cost? Our devices usually look something like this. Device 6 (Signature Weapon, 30PP, Flaw: Easy to Lose, Feats: Indestructible, Restricted 3 [Only The Worthy Can Lift, Only Wielder Can Use]) [22PP] Flight 1 (10 MPH / 100' per Move Action) [2DP] Immunity 1 (Own Powers) [1DP] Power Array 10 (20PP, Feats: Alternate Powers 4) [24DP] BE: Blast 5 (Thrown Weapon; Feats: Mighty 10) {20/20} AP: Blast 15 (Energy Blast; Flaw: Action [Full], Feats: Improved Crit, Indirect 2, Variable Descriptor 2 [any energy]) {20/20] AP: Enhanced Flight 7 (to Flight 8 [2500 MPH / 25 000' per Move Action]) {14} + Strike 5 (Feats: Improved Crit, Mighty) {6} {14 + 6 = 20/20} AP: Environmental Control 1-5 (4PP worth of effects [Cold, Hamper Movement (Icy/Wet Surfaces), Heat, Light [Ball Lightning], Reduced Visibility (Rain/Sleet/Snow), Wind]; 100' radius; Extra: Independent [+0]) {20/20} Super-Senses 3 (Extended Hearing and Vision [100' Notice Increments], Uncanny Dodge [Mental]) [3DP] 2 + 1+ 24 + 3 = 30
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