zero21 Posted June 10, 2008 Posted June 10, 2008 Name: Thomas Hallister Height: 5'6 Weight: 154 lbs Eyes: brown-now silver Hair: Black-now bald Stats: str: 10 dex: 16(+3) con: 14(+2) int:14(+2) wis:16(+3) cha:14(+2) Points-24 Saves Fort: +3 Toughness:+6 Ref:+6 Will:+6 Points:7 Combat Attack: +2/+6 electrical control Defence: 3/6(dodge) Init:+14 points:10 Skills Computers:1(6) 1 rank Craft(electronics):1(6) 1 rank Disable device:1(7) 1 rank Diplomacy:1(7)1 rank Gather info:1(6) 1 rank Notice:1(7) 1 rank Proffession:1(7) 1 rank Sense motive:1(7) 1 rank points:8 Feats: attack spec:blast, 2 dodge 3 Imp init instant up move by action-drive by attack uncanny dodge Points:9 Powers: Electrical control 6 AP: Teleport(Powerlines only), Strike(aura,electrical),datalink Super Speed 2 AP:Wall run Protection 4 Points:26 Complications: Ex-Con(Reputation) Disturbing appearance Drawbacks: Powerloss in water(electricity,superspeed) *if immersed in more than 20 gallons* 24 7 10 8 9 +37 Thomas Hallister was a one time computer technician for a local gang-he'd shut down the security systems before they went in..that was, at least, until his "people" abandoned him during a heist gone wrong-an attempt to steal proto type computer software backfired, leaving Thomas with several months of amnisia-and the powers of electrical control and super-speed. He soon became a leading member of a group dedicated to reforming criminals-he eventually graduated and began using his powers to protect those who cannot protect themselves-though some still wonder about his true alligances.
Dr Archeville Posted June 10, 2008 Posted June 10, 2008 Animate Machines is a form of Summon, and so by the "house" rules of the board is not allowed as an AP of another power (like Electrical Control). (See Character Creation Guidelines, section 7, sub-section 5.)
Dr Archeville Posted June 14, 2008 Posted June 14, 2008 You'll need to list the actual ranks for all his APs. And distances for his Teleport would be convenient. And we (well, I, at least) prefer things to be listed alphabetically. So, please alphabetize his feats. Combat Attack: +6 Defence: 3/6(dodge) Init:+14 points:10 Does he have a BAB of +2? That's the only way his combat totals can cost 10pp, 4pp for BAB +2 and 6pp for BDB +3. If this is the case, his attack needs to be listed as "Attack +2, +6 w/ Electrical Control" Defense should be written as "+6 (+1 flat-footed)" Feats: Imp init dodge 3 attack spec:blast, 2 move by action-drive by attack uncanny dodge instant up Points:10 That's 9 feats, not 10. Skills Computers:1(6) Craft(electronics):1(6) Disable device:1 Diplomacy:1(7) Gather info:1(6) Notice:1(7) Proffession:1(7) Sense motive:1(7) points:8 It appears you've listed the number of pp spent on each skill, not the ranks. Please list the actual ranks, i.e., "Computers 4 (+6)". Electrical control 10 AP: Teleport(Powerlines only), Strike(aura,electrical),datalink Super Speed 2 AP:Wall run Protection 4 Points:34 I'm counting 37pp (23+10+4) in powers, not 34. Another problem is that, if his attack bonus with Electrical Control/Blast is +6, then as a PL 6 character he can only have at most Electrical Control 6. The only way he could have Electrical Control 10 is if his attack bonus with his Electrical Control is +2 (trading a -4 to hit for a +4 in power/damage). 24 7 10 8 10 +34 93 Could you please spell out what these are? Also, why is he at 93? The Drawback points should be calculated in as negatives, giving him a total of 90pp.
Dr Archeville Posted June 27, 2008 Posted June 27, 2008 Powers: Electrical control 6 AP: Teleport(Powerlines only), Strike(aura,electrical),datalink Super Speed 2 AP:Wall run Protection 4 Points:26 That's 29pp (12+3+10+4), not 26. And you still need to list the ranks for those APs. Drawbacks: Powerloss in water(electricity,superspeed) *if immersed in more than 20 gallons* 24 7 10 8 9 +37 Please list how many pp the Drawback is worth, and what all those numbers are for.
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